Matt Bellamy

Nate, I can't change the word of the week - the admin link takes me to My YWS. Tried at 4:25pm GMT today using Firefox.

I'm a genious in my older years. :lol:

Edited it slightly. Thanks for the comments, keep them coming!

I try so fucking hard sometimes That I forget that I’m alive. Standing on a ledge and down below photographers and news reporters flash, and oh, the wind - I ...

I get logged out when I click on YWS Groups.

I liked the similes you used, but it seemed a little...unfinished. I was waiting for one more line, to rhyme with your last one, to just kind of round it ...

:lol:

BBB means that nothing happens when the bold or italic buttons are pressed when you're posting a reply to a thread. Not working for me either, how very strange.

Welcome to YWS :) I'd like to point out that we use a 2:1 ratio here; that is, for every piece of work you post, you need to critique two ...

I love the first stanza, and how you make references to nature in describing all the eyes you have seen. I also like how you separated the speech into its ...

I really like the tone of this piece, it just...sounds so good, you know? Your description is excellent, as well. Though I think I liked it better before I read ...

I quite like this style, it sounds a little...old, it's nice. I also like how you used repetition - "passed away, forever away", and "lain on the grass, lain on ...

This was all tell and no show, and loses all structure halfway through - the last five lines seem more like prose than an actual poem. Find an original way ...

It is a good start, but I need to know more - as it stands, this poem gives me nothing to relate to. Who are you talking to, why do ...

I like the repetition of inhaling and exhaling, and how at the end you seem to have gone to...well, what I would call your happy place. Also, "chastise my mind ...